Critique my business card design

Critique my business card design

I searched for the thread I made before with the original design, but I couldn’t find it so I made a new one. I tooke the feedback I got from the first design and completely redid the it. People said the first card was too crowded and needed to be simplified. Here is the first design if you want to see it.
front:http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww133/usdrollerrob/BusinessCardFront.png
back:http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww133/usdrollerrob/BusinessCardBack.png
New Design
Front


Back

Thoughts?

Clean. Very clean.

nice and clean,
you highlght the more important info and you do not put too much on iy\t

Use a little less bright of a color and make sure u know exactly what pantone ur using before it goes to print. ive had shit print purple that showed blue on my screen.

writes down number
looks up
turns red
what? im lonely

no but really. it looks good

booty call… OH YEAH i went there… JK lol:eek:


im on a meme roll

like it. inspiring me to do something similar.

if you arent good with computers, id recommend finding a local design artist (or friend learning the biz) and offer up some cash for a few rough designs.

theres also a bidding place where you request a design, and people do the work based on your submitted “will pay” rate. cant remember the name, though im sure that service is googleable.

i wouldnt recommend sharpening your teeth on something you want to present professionally, however.

Like the colors and I am a fan of serious business (and the fact you listed disco). huge improvement from your other thread

also, Chicago west 'burbs represent!

You stole my color scheme :eek: lol. Just j/k I have used purple and lime green for alot of things I do because it has been my favorite combo for over 25 years (yes I’m old). GOOD CHOICE of colors!
Seriously though I like everything about it except the [at] instead of @.

imo, i think you used too many different font sizes. Usually using different color texts is enough to highlight certain words but using different sizes and fonts will make your card too “busy”

You might want to check out:
http://businesscardproject.com/the-gallery/lenard-po-photography-business-cards/

That is my business card (photography) they did the re-design for free - tho you can have a lot of input with the designer (as i did)

I’m more of a web designer… But I’ll give input…

Add a small amount noise to background, make BG fade to very light grey in corners (sort of a spotlight effect), make the subheader black and the header purple and green, and make the back have the websites as green and the extensions as purple. If you send me a PDF I’ll try doing some changes really quick to show you what I mean O.o