# Critique this track for me. Scream bass good? :P **URL:** \ **Category:** Mixes\ **Created:** [April 23, 2012, 3:32am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177 "2012-04-23T03:32:57Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![NotSoSiniSter](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/notsosinister/32/16286_2.png) [@NotSoSiniSter](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/NotSoSiniSter)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 3:32am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/1 "2012-04-23T03:32:57Z")
**Critique this track for me. Scream bass good? 😛** Let me know whatcha think. I take advice well. 😛 How do make this song better? 😛 I mixed this track on some shitty ear buds…is the kick too loud? 🙂 https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?visual=false&url=https%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F42397455&show_artwork=true&maxheight=166 ---
**Author:** ![coupon](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/df788c/32.png) [@coupon](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/coupon)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/2 "2012-04-23T03:43:35Z")
the kick is lacking oomph ---
**Author:** ![botstein](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/botstein/32/14075_2.png) [@botstein](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/botstein)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 3:53am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/3 "2012-04-23T03:53:25Z")
Not mastered. ---
**Author:** ![NotSoSiniSter](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/notsosinister/32/16286_2.png) [@NotSoSiniSter](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/NotSoSiniSter)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 3:57am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/4 "2012-04-23T03:57:09Z")
> [@coupon](#): > > the kick is lacking oomph 0.o What kinda oomph? Should I add some kinda high shelf layer to give it a good stab? ---
**Author:** ![NotSoSiniSter](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/notsosinister/32/16286_2.png) [@NotSoSiniSter](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/NotSoSiniSter)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 3:57am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/5 "2012-04-23T03:57:51Z")
> [@botstein](#): > > Not mastered. I did master it out to the best of my abilities. What do I need to fix? 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![botstein](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/botstein/32/14075_2.png) [@botstein](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/botstein)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 4:02am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/6 "2012-04-23T04:02:15Z")
pmed. ---
**Author:** ![NotSoSiniSter](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/notsosinister/32/16286_2.png) [@NotSoSiniSter](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/NotSoSiniSter)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 4:04am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/7 "2012-04-23T04:04:21Z")
shit i totally put this in the wrong category…fml. Moderator…? 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![coupon](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/df788c/32.png) [@coupon](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/coupon)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 6:52am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/8 "2012-04-23T06:52:18Z")
> [@NotSoSiniSter](#): > > 0.o What kinda oomph? Should I add some kinda high shelf layer to give it a good stab? mm…im no producer, just a listener. but from what i can hear, theres really not much going in the lower frequencies with the kick. it just kinda sounds really flat. with that said, i really like the synths 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![NotSoSiniSter](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/notsosinister/32/16286_2.png) [@NotSoSiniSter](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/NotSoSiniSter)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2012, 11:27pm UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/9 "2012-04-23T23:27:03Z")
gaa really? I think I over did the kick a little bit trying to get a thump. I think I’ll eq it some more. 😛 ---
**Author:** ![interFEAR](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/ec9cab/32.png) [@interFEAR](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/interFEAR)\ **Post date:** [May 25, 2012, 11:21am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/10 "2012-05-25T11:21:56Z")
The drops feels empty. The bass feels weak and it seems to be missing out on a lot of mid range. You’ve got a much richer sound in your breakdowns. ---
**Author:** ![RichardisRaving](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/e0b2c6/32.png) [@RichardisRaving](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/RichardisRaving)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2012, 6:13am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/11 "2012-05-28T06:13:09Z")
This track is totally awesome! I disagree about the kick lacking. I think it has a nice thump to it. Though, I do think that the track is missing a lot of low end and does feel a bit empty. Maybe add a sub bass ---
**Author:** ![padi\_04](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/padi_04/32/56291_2.png) [@padi\_04](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/padi_04)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2012, 2:23pm UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/critique-this-track-for-me-scream-bass-good-p/41177/12 "2012-05-28T14:23:28Z")
moved