First finish tune!!

First finish tune!!

Okey guys!!this is my first song that I can say it’s finished. I don’t think this track is bad but almost nobody said me it’s good.
So can you please bring me some feedback on it? just to improve myself!!

https://soundcloud.com/calvin-campbell/unexpected

thank you!!

well let me be the first to say i think it is really good has a good beat to it and those glitchy noise were really twistin my head around. i think you need to bring up that subtle wobble u have going. i think it would make the track bigger and also dirtier which we all love. u really got something here. if u could and would like im always looking for feedbak as well… first track made in ableton. Feedback please!!!!

respect,
py

thanks for the feedback!! ok so…i tried to pump up that subbass but a friend of mine who works in a small studio recorder tell me that if he pumo it up it will be so fucking distorted. I will change it with another one.