# First Mix, Please Review

**URL:** https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649
**Category:** Mixes
**Created:** [November 19, 2012, 8:46am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649 "2012-11-19T08:46:36Z")
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### Author: ![takipanos](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/b3f665/32.png) [@takipanos](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/takipanos)
#### Post date: [November 19, 2012, 8:46am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649/1 "2012-11-19T08:46:36Z")

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**First Mix, Please Review**

Hi everyone. I am looking for some constructive criticism of this short house set that I made.

Thanks, Peter

https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?visual=false&url=https%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F67795687&show_artwork=true&maxheight=166

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### Author: ![monogammee](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/monogammee/32/13969_2.png) [@monogammee](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/monogammee)
#### Post date: [November 19, 2012, 4:51pm UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649/2 "2012-11-19T16:51:50Z")

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45mins is sort of standard, wouldn’t call that short, but that’s just semantics 😛

The mix itself was well done, the transitions are smooth and there is a good track progression, however, I felt like some tracks could’ve been aired for a shorter amount. While I enjoyed some of the tracks there wasn’t much of an element of surprise, while it’s consistent, it lacks a bang. Given that might just be my own perception of the style. I could definitely see myself setting this as more of a background music when people come over and it’s more about atmosphere and you just wanna chat and have something nice and unobtrusive to set the mood.

I enjoyed the tune starting at 18:15, nice deep feel to it.  
28:06 has a cool vocal and brass sample.  
34:00 i guess i just like the vocals in house, but this one’s catchy, good build up  
37:08 great melody line, I can picture it in my head being a great build up tune for something more energetic/boomy

Good job nonetheless 🙂

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### Author: ![fullenglishpint](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex001/user_avatar/forum.djtechtools.com/fullenglishpint/32/12539_2.png) [@fullenglishpint](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/fullenglishpint)
#### Post date: [November 19, 2012, 4:59pm UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649/3 "2012-11-19T16:59:54Z")

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Edited your post to embed the soundcloud player. In future, use the orange soundcloud button in the post editor to embed your mixes.

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### Author: ![takipanos](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/b3f665/32.png) [@takipanos](https://forum.djtechtools.com/u/takipanos)
#### Post date: [November 20, 2012, 10:46am UTC](https://forum.djtechtools.com/t/first-mix-please-review/49649/4 "2012-11-20T10:46:34Z")

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Thanks for the detailed reply. Indeed some of the tracks went on longer than I wanted. Someone had knocked on the door mid way through and I found myself rushing back to change songs. Overall a good review for me, thanks!!! Soundcloud button noted.
