FIRST PRODUCTION: Unfinished Business (Feedback wanted)
https://soundcloud.com/wastedyouthdj/track-1-unfinished
There you go, a preview of my first own track, begun from scratch.
All comments are welcome, and yes i’m a beginner 
Thanks!
Why’s it so short?
Because I don’t have a decent drop in my mind, plus it would be too boring if I last this 3 mins,
I’ve got an idea, but it doesn’t get further than this at this moment.
That’s not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we’ll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then.
This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they think of your pizza
God.. You’re such a retard.
And that’s NOT because you don’t like/ give a contructive comment on my ‘track’
You’re comments are just pathetic.
So is posting unfinished work expecting people to help you because you’re too lazy to finish it
oh hello 1980’s…needs more bits
Too lazy to finish?
Oh man you got me!!! I’m expecting some comments that will finish my song!!!
No.
Just some comments about the fucking bassline or claps or whatever.
What’s the problem with that, oh master-producer?
Didn’t you ever ask for an opinion?
You should think before commenting on a beginner’s track, most of the time they don’t know much and like some help.
is the intention a chiptune?
Don’t quite know what you mean with that, i’m pretty new to all the production terms..
You mean clips (like drumsounds/basslines) brought together in one song?
Yes and no, the drumline was indeed a clip, but that’s the only one.
The rest is ‘self-made’.
I know it’s not great, tought i’d get some decent help about things I just can’t know cause i’m a beginner.
Yeah, I asked for comments on actual finished tracks, not on a rough idea of a sketch. And you said you wanted comments on the “track”, and a track this is far from being.
Maybe read the title before you start to bitch about “finished tracks”
Who said anything about bitching? I left a comment saying you would be better of posting an actual finished product and would get more insight then. Did you not all “all comments are welcomed”? You’re the one who started name calling and getting defensive.
If what you actually meant was “Only leave a comment if you’re only going to say good things and not tell me the truth so I can actually push and strive to be better” then maybe that’s what you should have posted instead.
No.
You’re not ‘just’ commenting.
No.
You didn’t say I would get more insight then.
No, I don’t want “only good comments”
I said 10 times I’m a beginner and want constructive comments.
Title: Unfinished track (feedback wanted)
Jason:
That track is not finished!
Title:
Unfinished track (feedback wanted)
Jason:
That track is not finished! Thats like a pizza that is not baked!
You really don’t see what I mean, don’t you.
No this is what you actually said,
which is quite different in connotation then your last post. You come across as very arrogant and stubborn, and rarely have anything good say. I guess parents are free to raise their kids how they want tho.
Fine, I said useful and constructive input instead of insight, my mistake that you couldn’t make that connection.
Ignorant kid.
If by arrogant and stubborn you mean not afraid to speak up and say what’s on his mind, then yes.
And you’re right, parents are free to raise their kids how they want. Mine raised me to think for myself, not back down and don’t be afraid to be honest and go against the grain.
To be honest isn’t being arrogant and saying everything that comes in your mind.
You don’t seem to be very intelligent, if you were you would understand that a beginner doesn’t know shit about basslines, claps, effects, … Starting to bitch on an “unfinished” track, and above all do this with a disrespectful, arrogant tone, is just sad.