First Track: Detonate
my first sort of real attempt at making a track. Comments and feedback welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/damien-4/11-24-10-detonate
Genre: Minimal techno
Feel: raw
Cheers!
tekkon
Very good first song! 
Maybe some reverb/White noise before you drop something out like at 3.30.
welcome to the producer side of things!
Good start of a track, just need to polish it up a bit more
Thanks for the feedback guys. I agree it needs polishing and something more at 3:30. I was thinking of making it shorter and breaking it down more.
Thanks again!
tekkon