Karl Edward - Forever Tonight / Never Say Goodbye (2 Songs)
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Not my cup of tea at all this style, but you have produced some pretty polished professional sounding mixes for this genre. I think someone who knows this style would give you better feedback on the tunes themselves; but definitely sounds the real deal. 
HTH,
Tim
Thanks my friend, it helped me a lot and gave me a confidence boost. I’ll hope for someone who likes this style post here. Thanks again!
Never Say Goodbye
Your sub bass is drowning the kick. Either sidechain more on the bass or turn up gain on hte kick a little more. The notes on the breakdown/buildup melody on the 4th bar just doesn’t right. The drop’s lead melody is off key on some parts. The lead also has no midrange and is way too bright, it’s causing ear fatigue (harshness to the ears). You lost the sub bass on the drop.
Forever Tonight
At least the kick stands out more Your breakdown/buildup lead chords are on point. But overall the mixdown is way too loud.
You have the structure and composition, it’s just the mixdown that needs A LOT of work. The mixdown is IMO the hardest to nail since it requires a lot of technical understanding vs the creativity. The downside with creating commercial sounding tracks, trying to fill up the frequency spectrum w/o making it too loud and too soft.
Walls of sound. I like the first song most. Nice work.