looking for some feedback on a track i'm working on

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looking for some feedback on a track i’m working on

I’ve been working on this track recently, and I’m looking for some criticism by my peers so I thought I’d ask here. A little ambient piece, made a few changes since i bounced down this edition(changed all synths and reverbs to high quality), but i just keep thinking it lacks something but i dont know what it is.

https://soundcloud.com/petewoods/pacific

thanks!

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I like it a lot, really cool stuff. But it’s missing something to make it coherent. It’s too choppy groove wise at the moment. Maybe something as simple as straight off hat to help pull everything together might help it.

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thanks man, followed your advice and gave it a more rigid hats pattern, it’s tightened it up a lot, made it all stick a little better! any other suggestions?