Looking for some feedback
Hi, I’ve been working on a new track, and I just want some help making it feel a bit better. Pretty much anything you guys say will be taken into consideration. It’s not complete, I just don’t know where to go. I’m trying to get rid of the half-beat stuff at the beginning, and the mid part I’ve got feels wrong, so I figure I’ll scrap it, but I seriously can’t figure out what to do with it. Any help is appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/poizonous/aperature-science-weaponized