Looking for YOUR feedback!

[paulyoung4]

Looking for YOUR feedback!

Here is a new track that i put some work into. Really curious on what peoples opinions & feedback YOU might have. Thanks for your time in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/1paul2paul/subbin-rapture

Much Respect,
Paul

music is the sound of love

[Nephew]

Sounds like it has potential, just a little muddy in the lows and mid lows, and could some some sounds in the higher frequency range to help balance it out

[system]

more high man but besides that its not too bad. quite house style but still not too bad