Ok there’s a good few things here that need addressing;
Embed the mix into the forum thread properly (i.e. so there’s a player on this page, not just a soundcloud link).
In the intro, you’ve got bits coming in all over the place, a new element in the mix needs to be placed after a suitable multiple of 4 bars (usually 8 or 16 bars).
Have you used a master tick on Traktor or something? Because I think something like that has come through in the recording for the first few minutes. It might be on the track though as I’m not familiar with them.
The first few minutes seem a little clashy, but the mix actually gets a LOT better after about 5:30.