my new more techy track

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my new more techy track

yo!

this is my new more techy track. :slight_smile:
i made it with fruityloops + reason 4. i also tried to use sidechaining + xy controller for your listening pleasure. =D

would like to hear your feedback :slight_smile:

greets

edit: http://www17.zippyshare.com/v/82805048/file.html OLD VERSION : DDD

http://www19.zippyshare.com/v/87631606/file.html ā† NEW VERSION, take a listen

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any comments? :disappointed: :smiley:

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I liked it, reminded me a lot of like vocal house from several years ago. Well, I guess vocal house without the vocalsā€¦ But in any event, itā€™s good. I liked how you didnā€™t use a bunch of over-used presets.

If your looking for constructive criticism, the song was a bit anti-climatic, but thatā€™s only if your looking for suggestions, Iā€™m not trying to be a dick :slight_smile:.

Nice work!

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thank you very much! can you maybe eplain what you mean with anti-climatic?

cheers

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Sure. I just meant thereā€™s not really like a part where the song really builds up. Which now that I think about it, not everyone wants that in a song.

To me, it just seemed like you could have taken it a step further at some point. Again, not trying to be a dick.

But still, excellent job!

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yeah i tried different things but i thought adding the bass was just fine. :slight_smile:

other opinions please! :slight_smile:

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Dude I used your track in my first mix with my new controller. I love it could do with being a little longer, and a little more definition in the bass. Good work!

check out the mix, your in good company hope you agree!

www.ronsworldtm.com

Heaven (King Unique Remix) / UNKLE
No Turning Back (Original Mix) / Gui Boratto
Dark Passenger / Future Beat Alliance
No Control (Original Mix) / Sisko Electrofanatik
If You Wouldnā€™t Mind (Tiger Stripes Remix) / Sunshine Jones
Washing Up (Tiga Mix) / Tomas Andersson
Bonus Track / Cazals
Pjanoo (Guy J Remix) / Eric Prydz
The People (Eric Prydz Remix) / Sebastien Leger
Sqrium / JSK
Brooksong (Original Mix) / Paolo Mojo
Saturnication / Krazy Baldhead
Beneath You (Original Mix) / Mark Mendes
Sex On Fire (Richard Sharkey & Peter Sar Remix) / Kings Of Leon

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wow, thats nice, thank you! i can make an extended version with more bass if you wish.. =)

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bring it on! If you can manage it before 25April Iā€™ll give it a public performance! at www.dayofhugs.com 7mins maybe? tighten the bass a little perfect!

RBx

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here is the new version of squrim. thanks for inspiration to ron. ;D

http://www17.zippyshare.com/v/96264449/file.html

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Guys get it while you can! really really rate this track top tune!

RBx

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maybe other opinions? :smiley:

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the file seems to be down.. if you reup it iā€™ll def. listen to it..

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reupped:

http://www19.zippyshare.com/v/87631606/file.html

greets