My new release Progressive house | allouche - paradise

Performance & Techniques Music Production
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My new release Progressive house | allouche - paradise

https://soundcloud.com/elon-aloush/allouche-paradise-original-mix

i have on youtube too:

i would like to hear your opinion guys!

and i really believe in this tell me if you do too.
thanks

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Dude, did you just mute your kickdrum?

JK, but turn it up man, it needs to be louder in the mix. Also opt for a deeper kick/layered kick. Synths are good, bass is good, but you should build your patterns a little more logically man, your synth line confuses me…

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it has potential i think. Definitely agree on the layering kick - it needs to be more punchy and more bassy. Also i thing you need to add drums, high hats, shakers to add more groove to the track. You can’t carry it just on synths.

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lol yeah my biggest problem is the drums!
but im working on it more and more

thank you both

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Good job on the melodies! until 2:15, then too much happening for me. Drums need to be worked on, needs to be heavier and adding shakers or something like vpech013 said would definitely spice it up if done properly. I find the volume of each sound off, not mixed properly or needs to be mastered better. It has a lot of potential though!

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thanks man i took notice of all what you wrote and u can hear it in my new track…

https://soundcloud.com/elon-aloush/allouche-beast

ive open a new thread u can look at it and answer there thanks man