Need constructive criticism!

Need constructive criticism!

Hey guys, so this is my attempt at some tech house/techno.

This is a rough idea of the arrengement and type of sounds of the song.

I would like if you could give me some advice of parts/sound i could add, take to the song to give it the final polish!

thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/maxflugelman/josue/s-LCMRx

Well, it’s basic. Keep practicing and working, learn to use various VST’s, layer different sounds to make it sound interesting and pleasant.

Also, learn music theory, it will help a lot.

I like that noise in the background at 2:56

I’d agree with the above. One thing I’d also say is to work on making the arrangement interesting, otherwise it tends to sound repetitive.