Need help making this……..

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Need help making this……..

Hi,

This is the 4th forum asking this and STILL on luck!

I’ve tried making this sound but wasn’t happy AT ALL..

Here is the song:

And here is my attempt:

http://www11.zippyshare.com/v/99607284/file.html

Any (REAL) help PLEASE?