new electro idea. give ideas or critisize
produced on reason . could do with any tips youve got ? 
dig the upper melody after the drop. would love to hear a crunchy synth bassline as well. would recommend a white noise build up before the drop as well
Awesome vibe in this, can really hear the jack beats influence.
This track has a lot of potential! Just needs some work. I would definately skip that little vocal sample, or at least replace it with another sample. Just feels overdone and ruined the ghetto/fidget thing going on.
The first drop is really cool, and the rhytmic section has ass-kick potentials. Although the lead sound needs a lot of work, it sounds really cheap. No problems with the melody in itself, only the sound. Which reason synth is it made in?
I think also the track in general needs a lot more sounds going on in the background. Just really subtle distant stuff. Listen to any track of whatever good producer(s) you know, Jack Beats as an example, listen to, say, their remix of Fake Blood’s track Mars. Listen from 2:10 and just some 20 seconds from there. Really listen to it, you will start to hear all this decorative sounds going on in the mix.
Ah, you probably know this stuff, but I think the track would benefit a lot from it, and get a more professional sound.
Like I said, this track has a lot of potential! It already sounds good, keep working on it and it will be a banger!