NEW Track!!! Best Techno!!! Meat!!!
Hi checking my new track please and feedback:
https://soundcloud.com/dj-y-sab/dj-y-sab-amazing/s-3s77k
Best Regards DJ Y-Sab
Some thoughts, YMMV and I’m not ‘learned’ on the genre, but :
1 : i don’t think i like the shaker’s place in time, the sound is ok, but it the way it sits in the beat kind of grates on me.
2 : the tempo increase from 1:30-2:ish seems out of place
3: the white noise swish at 2:05ish needs to trail longer I think, and sit in the mix better
4: I do like the synthie blips from 2-3
5: 3:00 break…i don’t like the white noise swish.
6: i like the effecting of the lead around 4:00
7: I wish the bass line changed
8: it kind of falls apart for me around 4:45 into the last break.
My $.02, worth perhaps half of that. FWIW, I know fuckall about minimal techno, the above is just my opinion based on what I personally like.
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The track sounds very vanilla and “by the numbers”. Sonically it sounds good, could probably change a few things here and there in the mix down and arrangement, but it has nothing to separate it from the other 100 techno tunes in this style.
Sounds like a very “safe” production as well. Nothing unique or original. Try and take a risk and don’t just follow what seems to be “popular”.