New track featuring busta rhymes and apl.de.ap

New track featuring busta rhymes and apl.de.ap

first track iv finished this summer , much more pop , in my opinion , than my usual stuff , let me know what you think :smiley: cheers

and i managed to put it in the right section this time !!

also what genre would you say this is ?

I listened to your track at about 2am on a monday night because I couldn’t sleep. Here’s my feedback!

  • this has not much to do with you or your track, but god, apl.de.ap (wtf? appled.app? should I show the contents of his fucking FOLDER?) is SOOOOO WACK I can’t believe it. I also believe you that the voice of busta rhymes is on this track but omfg, arrrgh his neck ate his head in like 2004 and it’s hard for me to believe he’s the same person who made ā€œthe coming.ā€ but enough about the guest stars.. !

  • I liked the way you used the vocals, and the video was.. entertaining. I can see this track having relatively broad appeal in 2011. This might be a weird thing to say, but I could imagine someone using it in an advertisement.

  • The chiptuney melody got a little old for me by about the middle of the track, and I feel like the excitement of the progressive-style filtery builds was decreased by their repetition by the tune’s end. I also feel like the drum programming was a bit static/unchanging. I liked them when I heard them at first but I’d like to see more edits and structural progression to keep them from getting ā€œloopy.ā€

  • I’d say this is.. ā€œprogressive.. chip.. hip.. house..ā€ because it’s chiptuney in its sound, progressive in its aesthetic and hip house in its content, drum programming and tempo.

Thanks for posting, and keep at it! :smiley:

Thanks man , think youve picked up on most of what i would say are my strengths / weaknesses . (weaknesses been drum programming and being abit repetitive ) , this was my attempt at doing something a bit more , i dno mainstream

used to make a bit of chiptune lol so maybe that was a subconscious thing :smiley:

Progressive chip hip house , love that (you should leave a comment on the video :stuck_out_tongue: )

thanks for the feedback