NEW TRACK, FETUS ! feedback please !

NEW TRACK, FETUS ! feedback please !

Hey guys, I’m new to the forums. This is my first post but I’m an inspiring producer/DJ hoping to make it big so I’d really appreciate if you guys could give my track(s) a listen and give me some feedback on them !

Thanks !

https://soundcloud.com/tylercayne/fetus-original-mix

the bass growls at 1:22 sound out of key.. maybe they’re not.
I like the half speed drums you throw in.
maybe the arpeggiated synth lead is a little too loud?
the kick is lacking punchiness a little bit for me, on the low end.. i can hear the high end of the kick clearly.

The bass growl was out of key actually, thanks for that. Didn’t even notice.
And which sound are you talking about ? There’s no arpeggiated synths :stuck_out_tongue:
For some reason I took out to much of the highs on the kick, it does sound better tho with the punchiness .

Thanks for the feedback !