New track - would love some good criticism

New track - would love some good criticism

Any criticism/feedback would be awesome. Just getting started with ableton and would love DJTT’s thoughts

too flat, get some fat bass!

Nice start! I’d like to see it dive down and ramp up with more energy in your middle breakdown.

I would agree. I am not expert, but as a fan of the music, I quite enjoy it… just wishing it had a bigger low end.

Even a deep bass kick to drive it. I instantly think of Daft Punk’s album Homework… like “High Fidelity”/“Phoenix” style…

Enjoyed it. Keep up the great work!!!