Ryse - The Light (Original Track)

[In_Da_Wooodz]

Ryse - The Light (Original Track)

looking for some feedback on this track. any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/its_ryse/the_light

[daviedavedave]

I like the intro, it builds quite nicely, but the white noise heavy ducking sounds a little odd when there’s no beat… don’t know if that’s the effect you were going for? It doesn’t seem to kick in that hard anywhere and there aren’t any snares, but again is that what you were going for? It also sounds a little like the bassline and the melody aren’t harmonising well at certain points (e.g. around 44s, 3.20 odd and 3.50 odd).

I noticed the genre is ‘electronic’ rather than trance or house or similar, so I can’t shake the feeling these points aren’t relevant to what you were trying to do.. lol.

[In_Da_Wooodz]

thanks for listening davie. i appreciate the feedback! i didn’t put any snares on purpose. i wasn’t sure what i was going for…i’m still developing my sound i guess. i’ll have to listen to those points you mentioned.

[Deejaesnafu]

i found it be be an enjoyable listen.. maybe a little “typical” at times.. but well put together, and relaxing.