Hey, heres a little preview of something ive been working on today while being snowed in. It’s rough etc but wouldn’t mind your feedback. We might record vocals for it if we develop it further. But here goes:
Intro and breakdowns are good, my advice would be to tweak your lead synth a bit. Pretty boring and predictable imo.. Doesn’t need to be much, maybe just change its pattern/add a layer/add fx to it in the second (chorus I guess? ~2.15) part.
not bad for a draft but yeah I wasn’t overly entertained.. Honest feedback only!