I’ve recently started to produce a lot of electronic music, going out of my comfort zone as a more metal/pop-writer/producer. This song was made as an experiment in Logic 8 to decide wich new program to learn (the other one was Ableton. I’ve been a Cubase-guy for years). I think the song turned out pretty okay, musically, but I wasnt totally satisfied with Logic so I decided to go with Ableton instead. Got a lot of new stuff in the pipeline made in Ableton that I will post here, but in the meantime it would be great to hear what you guys think of this track!
Dope instrumental.
Sorry though, I HATE SWEDES RAPPING IN ENGLISH.
I used to listen to death rapper Necro… brutal shit.
Anyway, I got spammed on YouTube from a Swede’s version of that type of rap.
I listed to it and I wanted to kill myself. The English was fairly good but non native English speakers just cannot master the linguistics that are required to have lyrical genius.
I’m nearly fluent in French and can speak very confidently, same for Russian and Arabic(actually Arabic is mediocre) but I can’t master the complexities of them.
Anyway…in regards to your track…I did not like the rap although it was alright.
The music was good though overall. I really was diggin the instrumental…good job overall! Keep working on it, practice makes perfect and it’s better than anything I’ve ever made.
I also really like the instrumental, the vocal verses are okay. Although I would really like it to be all instrumental on the chorus/drop. It would mix up the song dynamics in a nice way imo, and because the lyrics are kind of (very) stupid. I think the track in general would benefit from small all instrumental sections, kind of like Foreign Beggars dubstep collaborations.
+1 on liking the instrumental, I thought the vocals were a bit “sharp” (vassa) at times, maybe a de esser would help? The energy was really nice though. Ösigt!
HOLY FUCK??? THAT WAS SWEDISH??? I thought it was English!!Jesus shit, those pills really fucked me up. My bad, my friend and I were sort of on another planet when we listened to that. After second time, NICE. Oh marone a mi, I’m surprised I’m alive but such a sick song either way.
Thank’s guys! Yeah you’re right about the vocals needing de-esser. Im just not that good at mixing vox, but Ill try to do it better next time .
Yeah I was also thinking of making the arrangements with instrumental choruses instead, but the song turned out more to be a popsong. But hey, this is 'ol crap now, next song will be better =)
.