techno track: “Tribal Wars”
https://soundcloud.com/blackfox-dj-2/blackfox-dj-tribal-wars
dude, this is my amateur feedback here… but i’d check your fundamental frequency on individual elements. seems there’s some overlap…
One thing i know i was doing a lot of was trying to introduce tons of elements to get variation, but actually i’ve since found that less is more. Have a few great sounds and modulate them to give variation. give it all space to breathe. it’ll also help to build the story, using the same characters, but developing them… not swopping them out mid flow.
actually ver 2 is already a huge improvement…
as i say man, this is my totally noob view on things…
thanks man