Unfinished remix - Make this your day (trance)
Hi y’all,
I thought I might just post my progress on a remix I’ve been working on lately. It’s a remix to Fabio XB & Micky Vi’s ‘Make this your day’.
It is in no way finished but I like the vocals a lot so couldn’t wait to work on this one 
edit: please don’t burn this down as this is one of my first more serious production/remix attempts..
edit 22/11 - I think it’s done but it has been relocated here comments appreciated
update: I’ve edited some parts, the intro and the end of this unfinished track is different.. Comment please 
okay I’ve edited it once again
Easy with the cymbals there!
Good:
Powerful vocal
great bassline
good smooth texture
good choice of complimenting sounds.
Needs:
another melodic layer in there to support the lead
more careful selection and tweaking of hihat and snare sounds
the third section to come in earlier.
a reprise of earlier themes layered at the end
a run-out.
Wow thanks for the feedback!
I lowered the volume on the crash, and replaced the hihat and added some fx to it. Also I added another layer arpeggiator which I quite like but hey that’s why I added it..
I need to think about ending this song but not sure how yet..
Thanks again
edit: something went wrong with the uploading but I’ve uploaded it now. Should be cool in a couple of minutes!
Darn, seems not to be working nicely. Another attempt:
soundcloud not cooperating.. check it out here!
So I think I’ve finished this track and uploaded it to Soundcloud again because soundcloud wont let free users reupload a file -.-
Check it out and let me know what you think
https://soundcloud.com/greenhouse-gus/make-this-your-day-final
solid remix. nice one.
cheers mate
hey mate! this is a very nice remix u did there! love the way u distorted the vocals it reminds me in some way of imogen heap - hide and seek.
keep on rocking
Thank a lot buddy
But I must admit the vocals are courtesy to Jonas Steur (first @ 2:29)