Finished WIP - Comptine D’Autre Éte (Lullaby Techno Remix)
https://soundcloud.com/blackfox-dj-2/blackfox-dj-comptine-dautre-te
I’ll listen when you have a finished project and then give feedback
you need some chords or somethin man sounds like theres a few more tracks you still need to record but anyways good start let us know when u get it finished up!
Exactly why I didn’t listen to it. Hate listening to unfinished material
I am generally not wild about listening to WIP, but am willing to do so if the poster poses specific questions about the WIP. Soliciting “opinions” is not specific enough.
@OP : what exactly do you want to know about this track? I can give an opinion… but what are you looking for when you post a WIP?
Finished
look first post.
Doesn’t sound finished at all. Where’s the kick, bassline, breaks? It sounds like one long loop with some sampled drum rolls/fills tossed in. Mixdown needs a lot of work from the sounds of it and there is no arrangement to speak of.
With that being said, I do like the synthline, leaves a lot to work with. But you didn’t do anything with it unfortunately.
don’t like breaks.
I’m not talking like a big massive, hands in the air kind of break, just something to help break it up and give it some movement.
Could be something as simple as droping the kick and hi hat for two bars, drop the bass for the last 1/2 a bar, and then bring it all back in with a new element added to the mix.
Simple, builds anticipation, breaks it up a bit, and keeps people moving.
And where’s the intro/outro?
made few changes