hi guys, check out my tunes :)
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    Default hi guys, check out my tunes :)

    hi, im a new comer, just learned ableton about 2 months now

    please check out one of my tracks at

    http://soundcloud.com/indrino/librio

    please check my other tunes on my soundcloud page

    hope that i dont put this in the wrong thread.

    thanks
    indrino

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    I don't know that I like the sidechained noise @ ~1m.

    The bass in the beak lead up at ~2:50 lets me down some.

    The noise break at 3:!5 I think could use some painful panning for effect. More umph.

    4:30 - 5:00 break I would drop everything but the pop sound.

    Overall I like it, though I think some of the sounds could be more ... shiny ? Something.

    $.02

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    Also I think the kick needs to be a little more evident, the bass seems to be drowning it out, maybe sidechain the bass a little

    I like it though

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    thanks guys, i really appreciate it

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    nice work man. I had a listen to your other tracks as well and its seem like the bass keeps washing out the kick. I think side-chaining the bass will help allot. Are you still mixing on headphones?

    I really like your sound so now im following.


    Damien

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    Quote Originally Posted by tekkon View Post
    nice work man. I had a listen to your other tracks as well and its seem like the bass keeps washing out the kick. I think side-chaining the bass will help allot. Are you still mixing on headphones?

    I really like your sound so now im following.


    Damien
    thanks mate, yeah, unfortunately im still mixing with headphone, i still cant afford a good monitor.. i will try to give more side chain to the bass, thanks for the advice dude

    indrino

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    I'm not a huge techno fan, bu this sounds pretty cool dude

    ...and as a side note, the waveform on soundcloud looks wicked 2! lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by rjw View Post
    I'm not a huge techno fan, bu this sounds pretty cool dude

    ...and as a side note, the waveform on soundcloud looks wicked 2! lol
    thanks mate

    check out my new tune as well

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