Feedback on a work in progress production

[djnrs]

A work in progress.. its a bit progressive electro and even dub. Without intention a lot of my productions have been turning into this, although I do like this particular track, I strive to get better at writing big melodies in grooves in dance tracks like avicii / hardwell.

http://www15.zippyshare.com/v/6314297/file.html

So far, I know the build and drop need work, i think I can make it much bigger. Also with the break, I think I will start that as a progressive drop as well, with the hi hats, snares, and 2nd synths coming after a 8 bars

Ideas for a big synth melody for the build up and drop possibly?

[Garygary1]

at 1:15, that synth line fading in is way out of tune. also, don't use presets

[djnrs]

Not sure what your referring to, but automation has multiple layers, and everything is tweaked, no stock settings.

I agree on the synth coming in though, It most likely will be replaced once i find a main lead I like to use as a build/break synth.