First finish tune!!

[Cameluntu]

Okey guys!!this is my first song that I can say it's finished. I don't think this track is bad but almost nobody said me it's good.
So can you please bring me some feedback on it? just to improve myself!!

thank you!!

[paulyoung4]

well let me be the first to say i think it is really good has a good beat to it and those glitchy noise were really twistin my head around. i think you need to bring up that subtle wobble u have going. i think it would make the track bigger and also dirtier which we all love. u really got something here. if u could and would like im always looking for feedbak as well... http://www.djtechtools.com/forum/showthread.php?t=24969

respect,
py

[Cameluntu]

thanks for the feedback!! ok so...i tried to pump up that subbass but a friend of mine who works in a small studio recorder tell me that if he pumo it up it will be so fucking distorted. I will change it with another one.