My ears feel NUMB =D need ideas/feedback on an unfinished track
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    Exclamation My ears feel NUMB =D need ideas/feedback on an unfinished track

    Been working on this track for a few days now and i feel like ive reached a dead end with it =D it felt like i was getting there but didnt make it so i would appreciate any feedback or ideas with the track

    After working on it for 2 i took a break from even listening to it but it left me with even less ideas to improve =D

    Last edited by BlackPete; 03-02-2011 at 03:55 AM.

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    I really like 4:19

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    i did some minor adjustments, changed a few things here and there + changed the title.. im still unable to hear what im missing here so all kind of feedback is welcome


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    Well produced track man, everything is sitting nicely in the frequency ranges.

    I think you could open up the filter cutoff on the bassline approaching the drop at 2:15, make it a bit more aggressive so that he drop into the more 'major' melody is better contrasted.

    I think you could speed up the middle section build up, it goes on a little too long.

    The last section, from about 6:00 onwards, I think you could play with the melody a little more, adding a few higher notes. They're nice chords, but just a bit static at the moment.

    The length of the kick outro is a bit unecessary aswell, in my opinion. I imagine you have it like that to use as a transition when DJ'ing.

    Just a few minor points in a strong track dude!
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    thanks man, exactly what i was looking for definately going to try out the things you said, i kind of lose the ability to hear "where to next" after getting too familiar with the tracks im working on

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    Ok so i gave it some time, now i EQ'd the track a little and added some more excitement. I think its about 90-95% done now, im going to add a few extra synths to make it more powerful and maybe do some other minor adjustment with the intro part.. any kind of feedback is still very welcome


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