New producer I need feedback on my first track!

[Ksariano]

Ok so this is basically the first track I've ever completed in logic. I did this a few months ago and just let it sit around. Also I did with some bose computer speakers but have since upgraded to the krk rokit 5 so now I'm definitely hearing things a little differently. Fire away!

http://snd.sc/e6NjZd

[anthony2025]

Like It! , It makes me think Daft Punk lol.

[Ksariano]

Cool thanks a lot man.

[Nephew]

For what it is, I dig it a lot. Only thing I don't like is the lack of depth in the mix, everything is upfront but the song writing is spot on.

[Ksariano]

Thanks for the feedback man the more I listen to it and compare it to quality songs the easier it is to tell that the mixing is no where near a professional. I definitely need to do some studying and watch more tutorials on mixing.

[Nephew]

Also try modulating some of the synths subtly to give them some organic movement so they don't sound so stale. Nothing drastic but just enough to make it come to life.

[jprime]

Drums are a bit weak sounding...kick and snare that is. Maybe a bit of compression, or try layering some more drums on em?

[calgarc]

lol way better then my first songs keep it going

[Nephew]

Drums are a bit weak sounding...kick and snare that is. Maybe a bit of compression, or try layering some more drums on em?

That can be taken care of in the mix down, no need to start layering stuff as it just makes it more complicated to fix in the long run

[mattsearles]

well I think it's a great first shot!!!

I think mixing.. is sorta what it all comes down to.. I think of mixing as very close to sound design in a lot of ways.. and how you craft your sound.. so I guess really that's like the next thing to focus on..