First go at any sort of production. Thoughts?

[Jingr]

I purchased Massive, and I'm using the demo of FL 10. Anyway I was messing around and I'm happy with the sound, just want some fresh ears. Only 45 seconds!

Thoughts?

[Rexx]

That's a really cool baseline!

But I think I would like to hear it with somthing that grips you in the gut and shakes your insides. Maybe bring it down an octive? I don't know. I do like it.

[Jingr]

Hey thanks for the input! And I would try that, but I fucked up the track somehow and since its a demo I can't fix it now. Haha. But once I actually have the DAW I will try that. Maybe just use it as another verse?