Original Production! Looking for Opinions

[Deltanew2]

Hey guys,
I've been working on this track in Ableton, and It'd be awesome if I could hear some feedback on it, criticism, opinions
(track doesn't have a name..yet)

Here it is!

[mmjkrf]

Wow, actually a really great track nice work man. Should atleast throw in some delay for the build up, gets pretty repetitive. Other then that, keep up the great work man.