Would like feedback on new track?

[whiteeyes]

Hey guys

This is my first post up here - I've been producing EDM for about 18 months (producing metal/djent stuff for 4 years before that). I would just appriciate a bit of feedback on this track - I needed a transition track for my DJ sets for 128bpm electro house/breaks to good ol' dubstep at 140bpm.

So yeah! Any tips or pointers would be ace

[packrat]

I hear some clipping on the kick drum within the first 1:00. Might wanna EQ that a bit more?

[whiteeyes]

Thanks mate - Will sort that out ASAP

[seitz]

it had alot of potential till 1.46

the main synth just doesnt seem to fit

[whiteeyes]

Thanks for the feedback guys -

@seitz - To be totally honest, I worked more on the stuff after 1.46! I'm not really one for minimal/electro/whatever stuff, so the intro was just a bit of an experiment!

So - I've decided to make a start on a VIP of this track, had good feedback on soundcloud... so into drumstep it goes! Still in early stages so any ideas/thoughts on that would be cool too