My first song "How to move"

[Ecoleopard]

https://soundcloud.com/ecoleopard-1 First song,any suggestions?
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[vpech013]

https://soundcloud.com/ecoleopard-1 First song,any suggestions?
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I kind of see where you were going with it but work more on the arrangements - stick to 4/8/16/32 bars - its hard to follow where the track is going. Its important to have some predictability in the song so listeners can be expect changed but be surprised with how they are introduced imho

[Ecoleopard]

Ya i see what you mean. It sounds like its going one direction and kinda dull instead of taking different paths and sounding exiting.
How would i change that?

[lapinfuu]

Try to listen to hardstyle song made these two last years it would be more explicit than words. Some sounds are good but like said before its a little bit messy try to organise things and play with filter to make your sound come in and out in your mix and try to start with only 2 or 3 different lead, melody, bass because there is a lot of things which doesnt work correctly with others in this song.

[chrisastro]

Just commented on soundcloud so read what I wrote there :3