I, uh... PREVIEW?!

[Chrxstxxn]

I don't know what this is, but I am just so nervous about it. I was telling my buddy over Skype that this is like seeing your kid go off to the first day of school. Maybe it's the metric tons of caffeine flowing through me atm but, here it is, my first rummage with seriously producing in mind. Thank you!

[Tarekith]

You sent your kid to the wrong school, this isn't the forum for track feedback

[ImNotDedYet]

Typically new instruments, phrases are added every 8 or 16 measure. I'd repeat your opening 4 measures for another 4 measures before bringing in the second synth. That way you have 32 measures before your kick starts.

Your synths are trying to "talk over each other." I'd EQ the lower end synth so that some of the higher end frequencies are lower levels, and EQ the higher end synth so that some of the lower end frequencies in it are lower levels so the synths aren't competing.

[Chrxstxxn]

Oh damn! I just saw everyone posting their tracks or pieces of tracks, my bad!

But thank you so much for the tip man, seriously!