check out my track. need feedback

check out my track. need feedback

hey guys, could you provide feedback and advice on my last track. Anything goes - energy, mixdown, arrangement, playability, whatever. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/vitaly-pecherskiy/blob-mess-rough

Are you just going to post every track you make on here?

well only the ones I make public. Isn’t this forum for sharing and learning

There’s also something to be said for self discovery and learning on your own. Plus less is more as well.

the kick is too distorted. dont know if that was what you were trying to achieve

fuck tha haters bro! i like it but something sounds a little off, over modulated or some shit