Ever felt like needing to catch some air?

Ever felt like needing to catch some air?

Well, this is my attempt at making a non-edm song. My musical background is around 15 years in a bunch of choirs but no instrument skills.

https://soundcloud.com/deejaypaddy/paddy-id-draft

Time is lacking for me but I really want to get this one done since I’m free from making it club friendly.

Reminds me of something that could be in Xenogears. Digging it

Thank you kind sir.