First Finished track!!! would love some feedback!
I finished my first track today and i would really love some feedback positive or negative so I know what i need to improve on the tracks unmastered and i hope thats alright also if anyone would like to master it let me know haha thanks for reading
Needs more variation and the whole the whole thing sounds way too “dry” for my taste. Gry adding some effects, more sweeps and variation on the melodies, add some instruments as well, to keep the listener interested.
Goldrich - I think overall for a first stab you did well. Some of the pitch adjustments seemed a little out of key however, so I would definitely do some homework on pitch/key shifting so all the sounds/chords sound in tune.
I liked the minimal sound and look forward to your next work.
~obscure
Goldrich
What did you use to produce / sequence this track?
If you could, would you please send me the samples you used to create it?
Want to see if i can give it a quick MASTERING for you.
Ill make sure to layer everything out in the same time frames.
However, If you used Sonar (cakewalk)
or FruityLoops say versions 8 - 10 to create this. YOu can actually export the entire project as a FL file and as a Project Bones
and send me both files.
Well thank you very much and ill definitely look up key and pitch shifting i dont know much about it at all haha
I did all the producing/sequencing in ableton and where would you like me to send the samples to that would be awesome if you could master it!