First released mix....can i haz feedback plz?

First released mix…can i haz feedback plz?

I’ve been mixing for about 10 months now and ive just started trying to break into the Bay Area DJ scene. all i put up on soundcloud up until now was little mashups but now its going to be full mixes only, and i’d really like to stand out so if i could get some perspective on what i do well/badly that would be invaluable to me :smiley:

https://soundcloud.com/dj-solus/subsonik-mix

so yeah lemme know what you think! im honestly scared as a mofo to be putting up mixes now when theres so many other insanely talented artists & DJs out there who i know could crush me so i want to do all i can to get my skills at a comparable level with everyone else

lol really no one has anything to say about it? i really do want feedback on this

Humble Feedbacks

Hi bro i am from singapore and my name is steven. To tell you the fact is that you did a good job in the mix but still there is no connection between the music and the target audience. sorry i did play at the pub where i spin, reviewes were not that good. you should have done better on the song choice and i felt that there was no genre behind it. overall mixing was not bad could have done better on the transition of the songs and effects on the tracks.

With Regards
Steven Paul
Singapore