Looking for a little criticism on a track I’m working on
Hey DJTT, beginner producer and aspiring DJ here. I’ve been working on some new Techno stuff in Ableton, and after a few hours work I’d like to get some professional opinions and advice. I know this track needs work, and I just want to get a better feel for where I need to improve and focus on my work. So without further adieu, heres the rough draft track, so tell me what you think!
https://soundcloud.com/djgleebs/techno-project-rough-draft-1-2
Feel free to give critique, advice, and ideas on where to take the track!
Please do realize though, I’m not a skilled producer (yet) and I’m already aware of that, so be gentle 
Thanks!
DJ Gleebs