Made a new track, would like some feedback

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Made a new track, would like some feedback

https://soundcloud.com/djbartje93/hyperspace

I’m trying to get the hang of producing so please, be honest and cruel =)

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Pretty cool actually. Nice groove and a lot of push for a Deep House track but it works. Two things, need to work on your arrangement if you want this to be a club track that DJs will actually play, and two need to work on your mix down and give things some more space and depth over all.

You’re on the right track mate, keep at it.

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Thanks, that’s kind of what I was looking for ^^. Started with the intention of making a techno track but sure enough ended up with something more along the lines of deephouse, and it shows haha. Anyone else?