new production rough draft...feedback wanted

new production rough draft…feedback wanted

hey all…gotta new production that im workin on…could use some feed back…

https://soundcloud.com/hackysac/new-1

Really nice and chilly sound. Clap is maybe a little too high tough, but i don’t know how you want it

Yeah I noticed that…and thanks…i was going for a strobe kinda feel.

I suggest you should put some more curves/filter sweep on the white noise at 1.55. I really think a sidechain on that white sweep should do success. And to make a better atmosphere at the intro part, use a chorus effect (Loading... (personally I really like kjaerhus classic chorus for this effect)) OR take a chilly pad and pan it left or right. This make everything much more deeper and full.
I really like this track and I like the relaxing sounds, and I really like the bass and melodies. The percussion at 2.27 is unique and is great! I want to hear more from you!