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New track! FREE DOWNLOAD (Moombahcore) feedback please

Girls That Love Douchebags (Pendejas) (Moombahcore) FREE DOWNLOAD!

https://soundcloud.com/dj-arehouse/girls-that-love-douchebags

first crack at a moombahcore track i’d love some feedback from you dudes! :sunglasses:

Arehouse

http://twitter.com/rhowzemusic

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I listened to your track a while ago. Then I listened to it again today.

  • I like that it’s about douchebags. Perfect for the club.

  • I like the vocal, but I think it sounds.. kinda unrelated to the music. And I think it’s too sparsely used. If you’re going to have someone really talking, I think you have to try to do a bit more “verse” or “chorus” action. You do this a bit with the “girls… love douchebags” sample but I feel like I want more. How long is the full original vocal? You don’t seem to use very much of it but you repeat a lot of it..

  • The Eazy E sample is pretty lol as a storytelling response. I also enjoy the bass drops, though the second drop seems identical to the first. RIP Eazy.

  • the whole track is pretty busy and repetitive for me, and I like busy and repetitive music. I don’t get much sense of musical progression from stuff like edits, breakdowns, buildups, instruments coming in and out of the mix.. right now it seems to be a long intro verse, then two okish drops and the rest of the track sorta chugs along.

Thanks for posting, and keep at it! :smiley: