A Review of My Production Style

A Review of My Production Style

Here is a 3 minute song that pretty much encompasses all of my production skills.

https://soundcloud.com/ddanse/falling-original-mix

I used ableton live, Massive, iMashine on my iPhone, and Animoog on my iPhone.

I would very much like it if a few people played the bad guy and made critical comments about the song. What are things I can improve on, what am i good at?
Thanks guys.