Good start I’d say. Not really my thing, but you have a good basic idea there. I think if i had to give some feedback on it i’d say you should be trying to have something happen every 8-16 bars or so just to mix it up. Songs can get a little boring when that doesn’t happen. It doesnt have to be anything big, even just a little drum break for like 4 beats or something. I would also work on the levels a bit, the main synth might have been a bit loud compared to the drums.
I actually quite enjoyed this. To be perfectly honest I’m studying as I type/listen so it’s not getting my full attention. But it’s got a good groove. Some nice elements in there that keep it moving forward. The sound/synth selection seems to be internally consistent and all work well together. Overall no real complaints. Mix wise it could use some polishing but otherwise I liked it.