Some constructive criticism required!
Hey guys,
so i finally feel like my production skills are improving. it would be great if you could give this track a listen and give me your opinions on the song and it’s mixdown. it may be a little soft since it hasn’t been mastered.
thanks 
That was great,
i loved the evolution on your track, each part matched really well
Cheers !
wow! thanks man! 
I would load a spectrum analyzer to the master channel and do a bit of EQing on the leads… maybe roll the highs off just a touch. also fade in some of those parts to smooth things out