Work hard, Play hard-Tiesto (Bambiiable Remix)
Hey, check out my first remix and tell you what youall think 
https://soundcloud.com/bambiiable/work-hard-play-hard-tiesto-ft
Seems like your vocals are clipping a little bit.
Maybe it’s because I’m listening on headphones, but the bass isn’t coming through real well for your kick
The change up introduced at 1:06 is so extreme both in terms of tone and harmony that I feel like it deserves a bigger breakdown/buildup to prep you for it
Around the 1:30/1:40 mark, you should add something new in… maybe something just as simple as a hihat on the off beats that really cuts through.
Love the vocal chopups, like the intro a lot.
Like the thing at 2:18, wish you had repeated it a little bit.
At 2:40, I think it’d be better if you broke it down to like just the vocal… Like really calm it down for a second, you go so solid aggro for the whole song, a little breakdown w just the vocal and maybe some pad chords in the background would go a long way to improving the pacing… because then from there you coud have a nice build up before you get back into the main riff.
Pretty good overall! Just some structural changes to break it up slightly, and maybe if you added in a couple of fills or touches here and there to add a little variety to the main riff, you’ll be set!
Alright thank you, It’s the first remix I’ve done, It’s a bit different than building from scratch