hi guys, check out my tunes :)

Performance & Techniques Music Production
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hi guys, check out my tunes :slight_smile:

hi, im a new comer, just learned ableton about 2 months now :slight_smile:

please check out one of my tracks at

https://soundcloud.com/indrino/librio

please check my other tunes on my soundcloud page

hope that i dont put this in the wrong thread.

thanks :slight_smile:
indrino

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I don’t know that I like the sidechained noise @ ~1m.

The bass in the beak lead up at ~2:50 lets me down some.

The noise break at 3:!5 I think could use some painful panning for effect. More umph.

4:30 - 5:00 break I would drop everything but the pop sound.

Overall I like it, though I think some of the sounds could be more … shiny ? Something.

$.02

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Also I think the kick needs to be a little more evident, the bass seems to be drowning it out, maybe sidechain the bass a little

I like it though

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thanks guys, i really appreciate it :slight_smile:

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nice work man. I had a listen to your other tracks as well and its seem like the bass keeps washing out the kick. I think side-chaining the bass will help allot. Are you still mixing on headphones?

I really like your sound so now im following.

Damien

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thanks mate, yeah, unfortunately im still mixing with headphone, i still cant afford a good monitor.. i will try to give more side chain to the bass, thanks for the advice dude :slight_smile:

indrino

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I’m not a huge techno fan, bu this sounds pretty cool dude :slight_smile:

…and as a side note, the waveform on soundcloud looks wicked 2! lol

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thanks mate :slight_smile:

check out my new tune as well :slight_smile: